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hi rvms !!!!!!!! sorry voki is not working right now Here is my photostory. William - interesting PhotoStory - but editing is well worth the effort! Don't be in a rush to complete work - take the time to ensure your titles are correct (capitals where needed, spelling checked). Remember, you can use WordQ with this program - it really does improve the impact of your message!

this my slide show i hope you like it

William: before I look at this again, I'd like to point out two things. One, the comment I made regarding your PhotoStory...that editing IS important! The second thing is the sentence "this my slide show i hope you like it". The fact you have used "i" immediately makes me suspect you haven't edited it!!! What do you think? What will the class think?