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Welcome to my page! Well done, Kieran! Thanks for following instructions! (Mrs. D.)

Kieran, just a tip but you should change your skin colour. Its the same colour as your hair. (Jack) congratulations (emma)

Thank you Emma

Nice chin Kieran!(AVAVAVAVAVA)



Haha nice!! (Alex)

WHATS THIS? A US FLAG? TRAITOR!!!!!!!!!!!!

Here is my PhotoStory! Kieran - good job with the PhotoStory, but a bit more editing would have removed those spelling mistakes (our/are, finest,...) Don't rush your work - taking the time to edit is so important! By the way, the music did appear at the end of your movie! (Mrs. D) That is very wierd Mrs Dewar thanks for pointing that out.



This is the background image on my computer it is so funny! It is suppost to be Mr Bean but in avatar form. I see the resemblance! (Mrs. D)

Here is my Favourite advert I saw on the telly! []

Hey Mrs Dewar check this out!!!! []

Here is my PowerPoint.

Kieran, I've checked over your PowerPoint. Great topics, but a little bit more time proofreading would help. For example, with Jacques Plante. He played for the Montreal Canadiens, but the actual game where he decided to wear a mask was in Madison Square Gardens, New York. Also, 'he was the first one to get a puck' is not very clear - can you reword that? There is a lot of potential in your presentation - you do need to spend more time polishing it, however!